I was as tall as a bus but the girl had to let go of the me. I was too big to live with her. It was heartbreaking. It felt like my heart was made of crystal and was dropping on a rock. I was very sad and I was happy I could be with my family. It was a very sad day for her too. My tears fell like the rain and I cried a river of tears.
I used similies in my quick writing.
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